A Rant Against Contemporary American Verse
B. Renner

There is, of course, no telling what marvelous things might be going on in the unpublicized wilderness of American poetry: in the smallest of little magazines; in obscure online journals; in the bedrooms of living Emily Dickinsons, who may be writing without looking toward publication at all.
On the other hand, what is going on among the recognized literati, in the American poetic mainstream, in the camps of the "dominant mode" is clear--American verse as generally practiced has reached a dead end. As American "plain speech" continually tightened its hold upon the various poetic communities in the '70's and '80's, vociferous that poetry speak in the language of the (apparently not very well educated) people, American poetry delivered exactly what it was calling for--"poetry" that, verbally, in virtually no way differed from the thousands of utterly tedious conversations all of us overhear or participate in all the time, and immediately forget. Or perhaps there is one difference--in the case of this poetry, we would mostly hope to forget it without having to hear it first.
American verse became telegraphic (that is, shorter than prose), without being sinewy or muscular. It became Aesopic (that is, almost always ending with a pithy "life lesson"), without being in the least charming or humorous. And if I may misquote, at this end of the century, Ezra Pound writing from the other end of the century, this poetry ain't nearly as well written as prose. (Not that our prose is exactly stellar either--but that's another essay that needs to be composed by another writer.)
Two groups, working sometimes as allies--the "new formalists" and the proponents of the "new narrative" (may I call them the new narrators?)--have suggested ways out of this cul-de-sac, but neither group seems to be interested in working hard enough to achieve its stated aims.
The new narrators, for one thing, tend to write in the same old American plain speech as the reigning literati, with the distinction that they are narrating instead of philosophizing. But their "verse" displays none of the characteristics of verse which the plain speechers jettisoned--i.e. any sort of regular rhythm beyond the limp iambic which underlies most English language speech and writing; anything like a plottable (or verifiable) rhyme scheme; and any verbal conceit of the slightest complexity. Which means essentially that their stanzas can be rearranged as paragraphs with no loss.
And what about their narratives as narratives? Well, the reader is unlikely to encounter any technique that can have been considered fresh or new at any point after the publication of The Waste Land or Ulysses, but might very well stumble across the kind of regional or dialectic ramble unseen since the death of James Whitcomb Riley.
The new formalists, for all their perhaps well-meaning attentions, can't seem to scan! My God--you are forgiven for wondering--haven't these people read Yeats, or Frost, or even Richard Wilbur? Instead they seem content to block out lines that look roughly the same length on the page, throw down an occasional end-rhyme (whether it will be noticed by anything but the eye doesn't seem to matter), break out the thesaurus regularly, and end up in the same place as the plain speech boys--with a nice little "words to live by" finale worthy of Reader's Digest.