A Review of Nathaniel Hawthorne's "The Devil in Manuscript"
B. Renner

Is there any "literary" author working today who does not long for the glorious days of the past?--the days when Sylvia Beach would step up to publish the early work of Hemingway and the too controversially modern work of Joyce; when bookseller Elkin Mathews would take on the brash, but gifted, Ezra Pound; when hereditarily wealthy James Laughlin would use some of his cash flow to give the later Pound and William Carlos Williams a reliable American publishing home. Were those days indicative of a time when literary acumen, and not cash, ruled the publishing world? Clearly not--or Laughlin need never have worried about typefaces and paper stocks, and Beach could have stuck to selling, instead of publishing, books.
And if Nathaniel Hawthorne's more or less forgotten tale, "The Devil in Manuscript," is any indication, the gentlemanly nineteenth century was not appreciably better. Hawthorne's unnamed narrator stops in to visit, on a bitterly cold evening, a good friend, "one of those gifted youths who cultivate poetry and the belles-lettres, and call themselves students of law." But this young man is no Grisham or Turow, who is so fascinated by his "daytime" career that he wishes to fill literature with lawyers. In fact, one wonders if he might have been inspired by Poe, since he has, in his writing, "endeavored to embody the character of a fiend, as represented in our traditions and the written records of witchcraft." Like Poe (but unlike Stephen King), young Oberon finds success denied him. Of the seventeen "booksellers" to whom he has written, only one has been interested enough to read his work, and that one has criticized the tales and declined to publish them. Another, he says, is "giving up business, on purpose, I verily believe, to escape publishing my work." Others are not averse to publishing the book (which--note well--they have not read) as long as Oberon advances "half the cost on an edition, and [gives] bonds for the remainder, besides a high percentage to themselves[. . . .]"
Unfortunately the disdain of publishers is not the only "modern" problem facing Oberon, though he may not know it. The narrator, who speaks highly of his friend's writing, thinks differently. When Oberon reveals that he plans to burn his manuscripts, the narrator does not "very strenuously oppose the determination, being privately of the opinion, in spite of my partiality for the author, that his tales would make a more brilliant appearance in the fire than anywhere else." Yet even so, the narrator admits that his friend's productions have incited in him something of the desire to be an author.
As interesting as Hawthorne's story is for its (presumably accurate) insights into publishers and editors of the 1830's and '40's, it is perhaps more to be admired for the sly humor of its narration (admit it--you have never put "humor" and "Hawthorne" into the same sentence) and the psychologically adept depiction of its two characters.
Hawthorne's narrator begins by telling us that, when he arrives in his friend's town, the wind is blowing "so violently that I had but to spread my cloak like a mainsail, and scud along the street at the rate of ten knots." That he means us to take this ludicrous nautical image more or less literally is indicated by his persistence in developing it. He delights in the envy of the street's other "navigators" who are, unlike him, heading into the wind, and one of whom he "capsize[s]." The precision of the imagery and language here, as well as the almost slapstick nature of the event, recalls (though it precedes) Melville's often amusing short fiction. Later, as Oberon prepares to consign his pages to the fire, he wonders if even Dante could have conceived a more appropriate punishment for a "bad" author that to have to peruse his own manuscript in perpetuity. But no--the narrator objects--"because a bad author is always his own great admirer."
This latter statement, besides being funny, also exhibits Hawthorne's awareness of the foibles of authors--a foible he may have considered his own in the unsuccessful years before he turned from short stories to novels. Likewise Oberon's dismayed (and accurately paranoid) perception that a publisher would rather go out of business that contract his book. But Hawthorne's insights are not limited to Oberon. The narrator seems to represent that portion of humanity for whom reading a story or novel always provokes the thought, "I too should be a writer." And yet we are given no hint that the narrator has actually written anything, even though his "critical skills" are practiced enough to note the flaws of someone who has written--flaws, we presume, the narrator would never allow into his writing. And the tale's conclusion--when Oberon's burning manuscripts throw such a flame up the chimney (there is a devil in them, you see) that nearby roofs catch on fire--reveals the depth of his obsession with authorship and fame. "Here I stand," he cries, "a triumphant author! Huzza! Huzza! My brain has set the town on fire!"
Instructors in America's plague of creative writing courses could do worse than assign this story on the first day of every semester.